Writing with Purpose

Literary Analysis & Argumentation

Grades 9-10 | High School Writing I

Course Overview

This course develops two essential writing skills: literary analysis (examining texts deeply) and argumentation (defending positions persuasively). Both skills require clear thinking, solid evidence, and effective communication.

As believers, we write not just to earn grades but to communicate truth, defend our faith, and honor Yahuah with our minds.

"Study to show yourself approved unto Elohim, a workman that needs not to be ashamed, rightly dividing the word of truth." - 2 Timothy 2:15

1Introduction to Literary Analysis

What Is Literary Analysis?

Literary analysis goes beyond summarizing what happens in a text. It examines how and why the text works - the author's choices, techniques, themes, and purposes.

Analysis answers: "What does this mean?" and "How does the author convey meaning?"

Elements to Analyze

Literary Elements

The Analysis Process

Steps for Analysis

  1. Read actively - Annotate, question, note patterns
  2. Identify focus - What element will you analyze?
  3. Gather evidence - Find specific quotes and examples
  4. Interpret - Explain what the evidence means
  5. Connect to thesis - How does this support your argument?
"The heart of the prudent acquires knowledge; and the ear of the wise seeks knowledge." - Proverbs 18:15

Practice: Initial Analysis

Choose a short passage from a book you're reading. Identify:

1. One literary device the author uses:

2. The effect this device creates:

3. Why the author might have made this choice:

2Crafting Strong Thesis Statements

What Is a Thesis Statement?

A thesis statement is the central argument of your essay - the claim you will prove. It should be:

Weak vs. Strong Thesis Statements

Weak Thesis Examples

Strong Thesis Examples

Thesis Formula

By [technique/device], the author [does what] in order to [achieve what effect/communicate what meaning].


Although [opposing view/common reading], actually [your argument] because [reason].

Practice: Thesis Development

Write a thesis statement about a text you've read. Check that it is specific, arguable, and significant.

Now make it stronger by adding a "how" or "why":

3Using Evidence Effectively

The PIE Method

Every body paragraph should follow the PIE structure:

Integrating Quotations

Methods for Integrating Quotes

1. Full sentence + colon:

The narrator reveals his guilt: "I could not escape the sound of his beating heart."

2. Woven into your sentence:

The narrator confesses that he "could not escape" his own conscience.

3. With introductory phrase:

As the narrator admits, "I could not escape the sound of his beating heart."

Common Mistakes

The 1:2 Rule

For every line of quotation, provide at least two lines of analysis. Your voice should dominate, not the quotes.

Practice: PIE Paragraph

Write a paragraph using the PIE method about a text you're studying:

Point (topic sentence):

Illustration (quote with introduction):

Explanation (analysis of quote):

4Analysis vs. Summary

The Critical Difference

Summary tells WHAT happens. Analysis explains WHY it matters and HOW it works.

Summary (Weak)

"In the story, the main character goes to the city. He sees many poor people. He feels sad. Then he goes home."

This merely retells events without insight.

Analysis (Strong)

"The protagonist's journey to the city functions as a spiritual awakening. The author deliberately contrasts the protagonist's comfortable suburban existence with the harsh realities of urban poverty, using stark imagery of 'hollow eyes' and 'reaching hands' to dismantle the reader's complacency alongside the character's. This transformation scene serves as the novel's turning point, after which the protagonist can no longer maintain his moral neutrality."

This interprets meaning, examines technique, and connects to larger themes.

Analytical Verbs

Use These Instead of "Shows"

suggests, reveals, illustrates, demonstrates, conveys, emphasizes, highlights, underscores, reinforces, challenges, subverts, contrasts, parallels, foreshadows, symbolizes, represents, reflects, exposes, undermines

"For precept must be upon precept... line upon line... here a little, and there a little." - Isaiah 28:10

Practice: Transform Summary to Analysis

Here's a summary sentence. Rewrite it as analysis:

"The author describes the weather as cold and gray."

5Introduction to Argumentation

What Is Argumentation?

An argument is not a fight - it's a reasoned case for a position. Effective argumentation:

Classical Argument Structure

The Components

  1. Introduction: Hook, context, thesis
  2. Background: Information needed to understand the issue
  3. Reasons & Evidence: Your arguments with support
  4. Counterargument: Acknowledge opposing views
  5. Refutation: Respond to counterarguments
  6. Conclusion: Reinforce thesis, call to action
"Come now, and let us reason together, says Yahuah." - Isaiah 1:18

Types of Appeals

Aristotle's Three Appeals

Strong arguments use all three in balance. Over-reliance on pathos without logos is manipulation.

Practice: Identify Appeals

For a topic you feel strongly about, write one sentence using each appeal:

Logos (fact/statistic/reason):

Ethos (credibility):

Pathos (emotion/values):

6Handling Counterarguments

Why Address Counterarguments?

Acknowledging opposing views makes your argument stronger, not weaker. It shows you've considered the issue thoroughly and can defend your position.

The Counterargument Process

Four Steps

  1. Identify: What would someone who disagrees say?
  2. Present fairly: State their view accurately (don't strawman)
  3. Respond: Explain why your position is still stronger
  4. Transition back: Return to your main argument

Counterargument Transitions

"Some might argue that... However..."

"Critics contend that... Nevertheless..."

"While it is true that... this does not negate..."

"Admittedly... Yet this overlooks..."

Avoid These Fallacies

"He that answers a matter before he hears it, it is folly and shame unto him." - Proverbs 18:13

Practice: Counterargument Paragraph

Choose a position you hold. Write a counterargument paragraph:

Your position:

A counterargument someone might raise:

Your response to that counterargument:

7Writing as a Believer

Using Your Skills for Yahuah

The analytical and argumentative skills you're developing have important applications:

"But sanctify Yahuah Elohim in your hearts: and be ready always to give an answer to every man that asks you a reason of the hope that is in you with meekness and fear." - 1 Peter 3:15

Analyzing Worldviews

Questions to Ask of Any Text

  1. What does this assume about God/gods?
  2. What does it assume about humanity?
  3. What does it present as good/evil?
  4. What is its view of truth?
  5. What "salvation" does it offer?
  6. How does this compare to Scripture?

Writing with Grace and Truth

When writing about faith or controversial topics:

Practice: Worldview Analysis

Choose a popular book, movie, or song. Analyze its worldview:

What does it assume about God/truth?

What does it present as good/evil?

How does this compare to Scripture?

8Final Project: Literary Analysis Essay

Assignment

Write a 3-5 page literary analysis essay on a text approved by your parent/teacher. Your essay should:

Essay Structure

Outline Template

I. Introduction

   - Hook / attention-getter

   - Brief context about the text

   - Thesis statement


II. Body Paragraph 1

   - Point (topic sentence)

   - Illustration (evidence)

   - Explanation (analysis)


III. Body Paragraph 2 (same structure)


IV. Body Paragraph 3 (same structure)


V. Conclusion

   - Restate thesis (new words)

   - Broader significance

   - Final thought

Revision Checklist

"Whatever you do, do it heartily, as to Yahuah, and not unto men." - Colossians 3:23

Teacher/Parent Notes

Course Goals

Students should be able to: analyze literary texts beyond surface level, construct arguable thesis statements, use evidence effectively, distinguish analysis from summary, and apply these skills to worldview analysis.

Sample Thesis Transformations

Weak: "The author uses symbolism."

Strong: "Through the recurring symbol of the locked door, the author suggests that self-imposed limitations, rather than external circumstances, trap the protagonist."

Lesson 4 Sample Answer

Summary: "The author describes the weather as cold and gray."

Analysis: "The author's stark description of 'cold and gray' weather creates a pathetic fallacy that mirrors the protagonist's emotional state. This deliberate atmospheric choice foreshadows the tragic events to come while externally manifesting the internal desolation the character cannot yet articulate."

Grading Suggestions